Thursday, 31 March 2016

WALT: write sensory poems

WALT: write sensory poems
Success Criteria: I can

  • say what I see, hear, smell, feel and taste
  • use descriptive words
  • describe a setting

The Beach

I see the shiny shells
I hear waves crashing
I smell dog poo
I feel the hot sand on my feet
I taste fish and chips

Written by Daisy-Kate

The Beach

I see the golden sparkly sand going through my hand
I hear people talking together by the beautiful sand
I smell dead rotten fish
I feel very hairy dogs at the beach
I taste fish and salty chips.

Written by Lila

The Beach

I see the blue water splashing onto the golden sand
I hear the yellow and pink crabs snapping at each other
I smell dead fish
I feel the water lapping against my leg
I taste yummy hot fish and chips

Written by Flynn

The Beach

I see waves crashing 
I hear dogs barking
I smell fresh salt
I feel cold water
I taste icecream

Written by Ethan




Sunday, 13 March 2016

WALT: Write expressively - Term 1

WALT: write expressively 

I know I am successful when....I can

  • use adjectives, adverbs, onomatopoeia, personification, similes and metaphors.
  • use my senses to help me describe
  • use present tense
  • write poetry