WALT: Write Character Descriptions
Success Criteria:
I can say what my character looks like, what it's characteristics are and whats it's actions are.
In Room 15 we read the Big Book 'The Amazing Machine'. We decided to write character descriptions on our own Amazing Machines. These will be on display in the classroom from next week. Here are some on the blog for you to read......
Auto Cleaner 500
Up where my room is there is a secret door and in there lives Annabelle my marvellous machine.
Annabelle's golden eyes are comfortable when they light up. Her gleaming body is like the perfect reflection with sparkly silver hair.
Her actions are slotting out money, going shopping and she cleans my room with my Auto Cleaner 500.
Her characteristics are being funny, pleased for what she's told and she's exciting. "I hope she listens to me!".
Written by Ava
Spider Man
My Machine is called Spider-Man. He lives with all the other machines. My robot has read eyes. My robot has wheels for feet. My robot guards the home with his eyes. Spider-man does my homework.
My robot Spider-Man is really really nice. Spider-Man is grateful for what he gets on his dinner plate.
Written by Tyler
Baymax
Under my bed in a magic box lives a robot, named Baymax. Looks like: Baymax has jet pack wheels and two blue eyes.
Baymax is helpful and he is so thoughtful. He loves to help me with my home work.
I felt creative after designing Baymax, he is my best friend.
Written by Phoenix
Ema
Beside a pond near a wooden house near a room lives my beautiful Ema. She has very light brown hair and has a pretty pink apron and is very pretty.
Ema is always kind and considerate because she helps people and never has bad manners. She always cheers people up when they are sad and is playful.
Ema always is a good listener, but makes mistakes sometimes.
Written by Connie
Izzy
In the corner of my cupboard at the back of my room lives inspiring Izzy! Izzy's deep blue eyes are always looking out for a cobweb to dust. Her shiny body gleams in the sunlight and her wheels roll smoothly.
Izzy is kind, thoughtful and hilarious. Her laugh is lovely. Izzy loves reading books and telling jokes. Whenever she isn't lending a hand she is planning a prank.
Written by Evie
Come into our classroom to read the rest of our Character Descriptions!!
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